For your first attempt, those are amazing! good work. They are pretty uniformed, and I can see the nice waveyness in them
I would say you have to backcomb alot more though, backcomb til your fingers tingle and your arm hurts haha
When you seal, try and twist as tightly as you can, and hold after the heat has gone onto them, so they "cool and hold" in place.
When you get to the end, I'd say get some pliers, or a hair clip, or if you have aspesdos fingers like me, twist as much as you can, and put the heat as close to the ends as you can(if you have a hairdryer, I suggest doing it with the hairdryer instead of the towel and flat iron, alot more effective =]), and much longer, all the while twisting tighter and tighter. then from there, as it's twisting the rest of the dread at the same time, I go all the way up with my steamer, just to make them extra sealed
I'd say those two falls put together, would make a nice sized single fall, you just have to do like...a load more to get the other.
I like my falls really quite jam-packed though >.>
Hope that helps, and happy dreading
